Underwood, Natalie [Completed]

[sakina]

So my name is Sakina, but you can call me; Sakina, Kina, or Kini. I have been doing this roleplay thing for About seven months, which is nothing compared to my twelve years on this crazy planet. I make no other characters on this site what so ever lead such angsty lives. It's a wonder they don't hate me. OH! One more thing, I came accross your site your add at Shock To The System. I just wanted to let you know that.

NatalieMargaret Underwood

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Name;; Natalie Margaret Underwood
Nicknames;;Nat, Leah, Lee lee.
Age;;18
Birthday;;July 4th 1990
Sexuality;; Straight

Hair color;; Brunette
Eye color;; Brown
Skin tone;;Caucasian

Height;;5'5
Weight;;110
Defining characteristics;;None
Tattoos;;None
Piercings;;Only in her ears

Likes;;
* School
* Guys
*Playing Her Guitar
* Making True Friends
*Albuquerque
*Science
*English
*Reading
*Writing
*Making The Best Out Of Life

Dislikes;;
*Her Life
*Herself
*Backstabbers
*Liars
*Jerks
*Snobs
*Not being able to stand up for herself
*Failing
*Cheaters
*The fact that she has to make all new friends because of her most recent move
*Her Broken Soul
Strengths;;
*Acting
*Writing
*Being extremely smart
*Playing Her Guitar
*Singing

Weaknesses;;
*Not being able to stand up for herself
*Her lack of courage
*Not being confident
*Her broken soul
*Her Habit of always blaming herself for everything bad that's happened in her life
Goals;;
*To build up her courage and confidence
*To be able to stand up for herself
*Become a better person
*Find a way to mend her broken soul
Fears;;
*That there's a possibility that she's not loved by anyone (not even her family)
Best memory;;

"I don't have many good memories through out my life, but if I had to choose then I'd probably say... That moving to Albuquerque is my best memory."
Worst memory;;

"That's a very tough question, considering how many horrible memories I have. But my worst memory is they day my mother was in a car crash and died."

Personality [overall];;
Natalie's personality overall is a very sweet and caring person. She tries to be the best she can at everything she does but.. She winds up failing because of her broken heart and lack of courage and self esteem. Most times you would never think that she has a broken soul because around other people, she hides it. She tries to lead life as a smart, happy-go-lucky person, but sometimes it's very hard.

Mother's name and age;; Name: Abigale Justine Underwood. Age: If she was still alive then she would be thirty six
Father's name and age;; Name: Johnathan Blake Underwood
Siblings;; None
Children;; None
Spouse/Significant other/Sire;; None
History;;
As a young child Natalie lived a great life in Malibu California. She got everything she wanted, her parents were happy, she had plenty of friends. But then her best friend Gabriella Montez moved when she was ten years old

That was the worst day of her life.. until her mother got in a car accident and died when she was twelve. She cried for many many months, just hoping that it was just a nightmare and that she would wake up and see her mother again, but that just wasn't the reality.

Her dad went into a very deep depression after his dear wife died, which made him unable to take care of Natalie anymore. So her aunt took her in. Her aunt became very ill, and within four years died.

After her aunt died she had to go live with her grandparents in Albuquerque. Where she will be attending East High.

Other;;
Member title;; Senior
Read the rules;;'Acting is awesome!!'
RP Sample;;
Natalie's alarm clock started to ring signaling that it was time to get up and get ready for school. She pulled her pillow over her face trying to drain out the annoying sound. After five minutes of listening to her alarm clock, she finally came out of her blankets and turned her alarm clock off.

She stood up and walke over to her dresser where she sat down at the chair infront of he miror. She picked up her hair brush and gently stroked her long brunette hair.

She stopped brushing her hair and walked down the hall to the bathroom where she brushed her teeth and put on makeup. " Natalie dear, breakfast is ready." Natalie's grandma called from the down stairs kitchen. " I'll be down soon!" She yelled. She walked back into her room and got dressed then headed down stairs and into the kitchen.

She sat down at the table at ate the pancakes that were sitting infront of her on her plate. She sighedas she stuck her fork into the pancakes. After she finished eating, she grabbed her backack, slung it over her shoulder. "I'm leaving now." She yelled up the stairs to her grandparents. When she got no reply she walked out of the door and headed to school.

_{credit where credit is due. lyrics to All That Remains from the songs Two Weeks and This Calling. Application by me, Aly. aka taya, nolita of white pages and humanity hostage of caution2.0. don't steal. thats all I ask, credit and I will love you forever, or atleast give you a cookie. just not snickers cookies cause they are for my deanna-love.}

[Troy Bolton]

Okay, first off, I just want to say that I don't mean to be rude. This is just somethings that I've been seeing and such and thought I would make them known. After reading this application, age shows and your role playing time is definitely showing. Also, on the site, your immaturity is showing a lot. You have broken a few rules and you haven't even been accepted. I am going to list the rules you have broken and what you need to fix in order to get accepted, if we feel we want to accept you:

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[li] Annoying the Admins: The first PM you sent Alli was asking the question if your character could be Gabriella's friend. That was fine, understandable. But then you PM'd her telling her your application wasn't done. We can figure that out by seeing the [completed] or [not completed] or [w.i.p.] at the top of the application. You don't need to pm the admins about that. Then you pm'd her a third time saying the same thing. You didn't need to do that. Then you pm'd her asking her if she was okay with your character being friends with Gabriella. If it wasn't okay we would say so in the application as a reply. You didn't need to ask just do and then we would tell you to correct it. Not only have you annoyed the admins through pm's but also the C-Box. On March 24th at 9:26 pm you asked Alli if she had read your message yet. Don't ask, just be patient and wait for a reply. It gets annoying because we all have threads to reply to, homework to do, and other lives out side this site.

[/li][li] Spamming of the C-Box: Spamming anything is annoying, whether it be an inbox on an email or what not. You have spammed the C-box and when I read it I was like, is this girl really that immature? Spamming the C-Box is not only annoying to the Admins but to other members as well. When you spam the C-Box if there is another conversation going on, it gets interrupeted by the spammer. On March 24th at 6:14 pm you spammed it by saying 'So Adorable!' using the letter 's' and 'o' and exclamiation point over and over. On the same date at 6:17pm you spammed it by saying 'So Cute' using the letters 's' and 'o' over and over again, once again. It's annoying and childish and immature to spam things.


Miscellaneous

[/li][li] Personal Lives/Issues: Now I know this isn't a rule but it's just rude and annoying for other members. I understand, from what I've read in the C-box and see the way you two talk, you and Chris are friends. I understand that. But what I find is annoying, and other people might as well, is the personal stuff. Talking about other people (friends) in the C-Box and other sites.. that's why they invented Private Messaging. Talking about personal stuff in the C-Box is just like Spamming. Because if someone has a conversation going on and you two are talking about personal issues, then the conversation is ruined. So if you and Chris want to talk about personal stuff, either text it to each other while on the site or send it to each other through a PM.

[/li][li] Maturity: Now I undestand, from your application, it says you're only twelve and it definitely shows. While reading the C-Box the way you act sometimes is an indication on how immature you can be. Now, I deal with, and I'm sure other people on here deal with, immature people and tons of drama and the last thing we need is to come here and deal with more immature people. We don't need it in our lives or on this site. This site is a mature site, so maybe this isn't the site for you.

And now onto your application:

[/li][li] Intermediate/Advanced Site: This site is an intermediate to advanced site. This means that your are expected to post between 300-700 words here, and your sentences should be well developed, and something that you wouldn’t be embarrassed to show your english teacher. And you are expected to post one or two paragraphs, with content that has quality that people can respond to. Also with your application, it follows the same rules. It should be something that your english teacher would be like "This is excellent!"

[/li][li] Personality: Your personality has a lot to be desired. Your personality isn't that good. It isn't descriptive enough. An intermediate/Advanced site requires things to be indepth and descriptive. Your persoanlity isn't descriptive and indepth at all. If you need to see a sample of a better personality description then you can check out Troy Bolton's personality, or Gabriella's personality. But we expect it to be better then what you have written. Plus your character is an OC meaning your making it up. Your character's personality, you should have a lot to write where as Gabriella and Troy's personality is sorta set for them because of who they are in the movie, but we still develop the personality.

[/li][li] History: Your history, is horrible. Especially since your character is an Original Character. But even if it was a canon character it still should be better then yours. Your history doesn't tell us anything. What about your characters school years? And friends? And you mention a movie that she was in... in your history it says nothing about the movie. Your history, since it is an original character and you're pretty much making up the history should be at least 5-7 paragraphs, well written paragraphs. It should give detail and description of your characters life from birth until now. It has a lot to be desired.

[/li][li] RP Sample: Your RP sample is very vague and this is supposed to give us an idea of how you are going to be rping here on the site. From this, I don't want to accept you because the members wouldn't be able to write a reply based on what you have written as your sample. I see you have only been roleplaying for 7 months but that's no excuse. Pretty much you are writing a small part to a story. A well written story. From what I can see, you aren't a good writer so maybe this intermediate/advanced site isn't for you. Maybe you should start off on a small site (beginner) and work your way to an bigger site (intermediate).
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Us admins are very wary about accepting you because we feel that you are immature and a little too young for this site. Because this site has sexual content you should be over 15 to be on the site. Reason being, because most kids under 15 are too immature (as we have seen with you) to read such threads. So like I have said, at this time we are not going to accept you and even if you do make the changes, we still maybe cautious about accepting you. We, as the admins, have the right to do this.

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